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authorLaurent Bercot <ska-skaware@skarnet.org>2020-09-16 12:04:55 +0000
committerLaurent Bercot <ska-skaware@skarnet.org>2020-09-16 12:04:55 +0000
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@@ -38,7 +38,7 @@ environment.
 <a href="s6-fdholderd.html">s6-fdholderd</a> server process listening on
 <em>path</em>. </li>
  <li> It retrieves a copy of the whole set of file descriptors
-stored in that daemon, including their identifiers and expiration dates. </li>
+stored in this daemon, including their identifiers and expiration dates. </li>
  <li> It then executes into <em>prog...</em> with the additional open descriptors
 and the additional environment variables. </li>
 </ul>
@@ -60,7 +60,7 @@ wrong socket, for instance). </li>
  <li> 1: the server denied the operation. The meaning of the error messages
 is explained <a href="s6-fdholder-errorcodes.html">here</a>. </li>
  <li> 100: wrong usage. </li>
- <li> 111: system call failed - that includes attempting to connect to a
+ <li> 111: system call failed - this includes attempting to connect to a
 nonexistent socket, or one where no <a href="s6-fdholderd.html">s6-fdholderd</a>
 daemon is listening. </li>
 </ul>
@@ -82,10 +82,10 @@ open file descriptor. </li>
   <li> <tt>S6_FDID_<em>i</em></tt>&nbsp;: contains the identifier of the
 <em>i</em>th open file descriptor. </li>
   <li> <tt>S6_FDLIMIT_<em>i</em></tt>&nbsp;: contains the expiration date of
-the <em>i</em>th open file descriptor, if applicable. That date is stored in
-<a href="http://cr.yp.to/libtai/tai64.html#tai64n">external TAI64N
+the <em>i</em>th open file descriptor, if applicable. This date is stored in
+<a href="https://cr.yp.to/libtai/tai64.html#tai64n">external TAI64N
 format</a>.<br />
-If the file descriptor is not supposed to expire, that environment variable
+If the file descriptor is not supposed to expire, this environment variable
 is not defined. </li>
  </ul> </li>
 </ul>
@@ -107,7 +107,7 @@ program does the same thing more efficiently.
 <h2> Notes </h2>
 
 <ul>
- <li> Getting the whole state of a s6-fdholderd daemon requires specific
+ <li> Getting the whole state of an s6-fdholderd daemon requires specific
 privileges. Make sure you properly
 <a href="s6-fdholderd.html#configuration">configure the s6-fdholderd
 access rights</a> so your client can perform that operation. </li>